An embarrassing date
Group 2, Students: Eriko, Rick

Text: (blue is your mistakes, red is my corrections)
1) They contacted on Tinder. The lady thought he is a good man. They were talking on the phone.
2) The man was going to his friend's house when he remembered that he needed some condoms.  
3) On his way to his friend's house,  there was a chemist. 
4) He went into the chemist. But a the cashier stuff (the cashier was… - staff is a group noun – the staff of a business is all the workers in the business. One person is a member of staff. but cashier is enough.) was a old women. He was embarrassed to ask about condoms.
5) He asked the women about another other mans stuff (stuff is uncountable, so you can't use another).
6) He asked for something his hemorrhoids hemorrhoids (probably the hardest word to spell in English). Then a man appeared.
7) Then he asked about  condoms.
8) He decided to buy many condoms. 
9) He was happy and then he went to his friend's house.
10) He borrowed his friend's car. He pretended to be a good man.
11) He arrived at her house.
12) Unfortunately the old man was her dad.
13) He was embarrassed. He tried to cover the situation with a proposal.

Good work!